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One thought on “This is not the End by Brendan Stoneham

  1. I have always found the personification of Life an intriguing notion and one with many historical precedents.

    In this poem, Life is depicted as a female; who has suffered a languishing blow that has left the magic of her shadows [What are the shadows of Life?] in tatters. So much so, that they cease to dance and instead cry out, because of the unceasing suffering of Life.


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